Do We Ever Really Learn?Sometimes an old piece of writing surfaces — a scrap from a different version of ourselves — and it asks quietly whether it still belongs to us.This one was written in 2016, during a time when rhyme felt like a kind of scaffolding, a way to hold emotion steady. Reading it… Continue reading Revision of a 2016 poem
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Revised You
I posted the poem you yesterday I have reviewed it and changed and hopefully improved it what do you think? You. There is no mistaking you, Standing poised by the jeep, Surrounded by fractured light, like a being from another dimension, Your head thrown back, emitting sounds that I cannot hear, I am imagining, the… Continue reading Revised You
Converging Lives. Sounds, Silence and Imagery 