What makes your writing boring Other than the obvious …you have no ideas What if your tale is magical but your prose is in arrears What makes your writing boring The tale just comes out flat People give up reading and settle for a nap The pundits say too many filter words can slow the… Continue reading What makes your writing boring?
Category: Beliefs
A new set of values???
What did I want from this life? Did I understand as I stumbled through? Planning. No more like serendipity With no direction what have I missed? With reaction rather than considered action What crass decisions have I made? How have those decisions rolled out across the the cosmos? How have those ripples impacted on others?… Continue reading A new set of values???
Dilemma
Dilemma Jump into the abyss What will my landing be Will I hit the labyrinth Will you be there to catch me Treasure Explore the winding paths together What will my role be Will we explore, a joint endeavour Will you smother me Dilemma
Upside down
Upside down Inside out Puckered frown Buckets of doubt Senseless Spiral Empty Void Needless worries Too much pride
Drifting
Words of love often suppressed Kindness taken for granted, unexpressed Presumption of thoughts, norms and dreams Seems we no longer talk of schemes Drifting along feather light Lack of communication lack of fight Minds door closed How to rewind, do you suppose Need to look and see the whole Can we clean the windows, throw… Continue reading Drifting
He loves me……not
He loves me he loves me not I am me I almost forgot Better to be true to me Than to try to be somebody else, for him to see Its so nice to have loving affirmation But staying true to self that’s confirmation We walk the path and share the joys Also the angst… Continue reading He loves me……not
The fog that you left
Mist rising upwards like gossamer threads Clearing my mind from the fog, that you left Treading in circles, the pathway obscured The mist is slowly burning off, a signpost has cleared Chosing a way to move forward in my life Tears replaced, smiling revived
I am missing you
I am missing you Where have you gone I see you sitting beside me The link was so strong Now things have changed The passion has died Life is a plateau Hot tears I have cried I am missing you Where have you gone You are here in body I need to hear your song… Continue reading I am missing you
Life is a circus
Life is a circus Some would say Does that mean a dull grind, day after day Or a series of adventures With new skills to learn Maybe with some stress, to grin and burn Life is a circus Some would say Populated with clowns sinister or gay But how about the strongman Or the lion… Continue reading Life is a circus
Flying High
Sometimes we explore all realms of being Life, and emotions it’s totally freeing Trust that binds us allows for sharing All ideas pondered our intimacy baring Expression lands us raw and intense Ideas unlocked excitingly immense So many situations and fun to try out Partners of pleasure no limits no doubt Flying high on clouds… Continue reading Flying High
