What makes your writing boring?

​What makes your writing boring  Other than the obvious …you have no ideas What if your tale is magical but your prose is in arrears  What makes your writing boring  The tale just comes out flat People give up reading and settle for a nap The pundits say too many filter words can slow  the… Continue reading What makes your writing boring?

A new set of values???

​What did I want from this life? Did I understand as I stumbled through? Planning. No more like serendipity  With no direction what have I missed? With reaction rather than considered action What crass decisions have I made? How have those decisions  rolled out across the the cosmos? How have those ripples impacted on others?… Continue reading A new set of values???

Drifting

​Words of love often suppressed  Kindness taken for granted, unexpressed Presumption of thoughts, norms and dreams Seems we no longer talk of schemes Drifting along feather light Lack of communication lack of fight Minds door closed  How to rewind, do you suppose Need to look and see the whole Can we clean the windows, throw… Continue reading Drifting

Flying High

Sometimes we explore all realms of being Life, and emotions it’s totally freeing Trust that binds us allows for sharing All ideas pondered our intimacy baring  Expression lands us raw and intense Ideas unlocked excitingly immense So many situations and fun to try out  Partners of pleasure no limits no doubt  Flying high on clouds… Continue reading Flying High